Hi Andrew
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog. Your experience in New Zealand must have been challenging for you. Choosing to leave home for twelve months is hard enough, let alone going 3000 km in a different country, and you must miss your family so much. What a great way to describe the beach view. At first, you were not happy there, then at the end of the day, you felt comfortable within yourself, but what an experience with youth you must have had. You must be so proud of yourself.
Thanks, Heather
Through My Eyes 
An excellent peer review Heather. You really manage to enter into Andrew’s experience and give a sense of what you really liked about his work. Excellent.
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*at the end of the day, You felt comfortable…= at the end of the day, you felt comfortable
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